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Monday, 19 March 2018

Bird Story

This is my Bird Story for narrative writing, I have re-read it and fixed up all my mistakes I found in each paragraph.

1 comment:

  1. nice presentation for proof reading checklist good work. what activities are you doing in writing for 2018. But a bit hard to read Maybe could make the font bigger next time .

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