Talova lava my name is Meleane and I am a student in Manukau Room at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you wrote a paragraph of the Anzac people. It made me think of how I wrote my acrostic poem when I was a Year Three. Have you thought about making a slideshow or making a poem. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is: meleanet.blogspot.co.nz.
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Talova lava my name is Meleane and I am a student in Manukau Room at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you wrote a paragraph of the Anzac people. It made me think of how I wrote my acrostic poem when I was a Year Three. Have you thought about making a slideshow or making a poem. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is: meleanet.blogspot.co.nz.
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