This week we are writing about Beauty or Brains. Please enjoy my writing!!
Thursday 25 May 2017
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Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Hi Faith I am Natasha from Paroa school. Your persuasive writing is really good. I like how you stuck to the topic of beauty and makeup instead of going a bit off the topic. For BTB (Better Than Before) you could read what you wrote to your friends to check all the words are in the right spots and things like that.
ReplyDeleteDo you like telling jokes I do! why did the possum cross the road...
To see his flat mate!
could you please check out my story about Mr Madguts at
http://paroagreynatashal.blogspot.co.nz/2017/03/mr-madguts.html#comment-form
thanks for reading my comment and please reply!