This week we were writing about whether Facebook is good or not, WALT: summarize our main points and paraphrase. Hope you enjoy my writing leave your blog link in the comments so I can see your work.
hi this is Rhea from paroa school grey mouth. I like this peace of writing faith.it is really cool to see you into such a good topic. I also have a friend called faith. to improve you could make it a bit more interesting. RHEA
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hi this is Rhea from paroa school grey mouth. I like this peace of writing faith.it is really cool to see you into such a good topic. I also have a friend called faith. to improve you could make it a bit more interesting.
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